Dj-FreeZe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[THE SHIRA SHOW]

Felt like I had to have read a bunch of discord conversations to understand what was happening here. Art style is very lazy and animation timing needs a lot more work. Focus more on the why of the situation and you'll be able to make better choices to aid in the animation's flow.

Frownelius responds:

oh ok. it was a really old project and i had no idea what was happening either when i started finishing it yesterday. i'm aware of the fact that the artstyle is shit, because i originally drew the art on a school chromebook when i was first working on it. i'll try to make the next episode better quality and have it make more sense.

[The Dashkin - Trailer 1]

I'M SO EXCITED. I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY BUTT!

[Better Dreams]

Was enjoyable. Brought me back to an earlier time.

[First fullbody]

The audio definitely needs some attention. The voice recording had a lot of plosives and wasn't clear enough to hear without volume but then immediately, there are loud white noise static sounds which blow out the ear drums. Definitely needs some work. Keep at it.

dynamicsof responds:

Sure, thank you..

[Pokemon Battle]

Didn't rate it very high because it isn't complete. I like where you are taking this style but I think you should remove the sprites completely and do the effects yourself. You clearly have some talent and I think that if you completed this and submitted it with a some audio editing (effects being overly loud and flooding) and removed the sprites, you'd have a killer animation. Hope this helps, man. Well done.

[Chaos Clash]

Advertising? FOR SHAME!

mattyking1985 responds:

no, i'm not ashamed of my artwork, and I believe your on this site to look at it.

[Kingdom hearts corrupted]

After pressing spacebar, I was greeted with a white screen and nothing else. Couldn't really give you an honest rating. Sorry.